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loloolololololololoolololololololololololollololololololololololollolollool I love these!! MOAR NAO!

Anyway for the crit, I'd say your hands are a little too big, and the face look slightly werid sometimes but besides that its awesome, the expressions are tight. gonna follow you on dA....*evil laugh*

Dai wrote:I figured that I should probably share what I've been working on lately. I've been drawing webcomics during the past month, I'd like to know if there's anything you guys think I should change or improve on before I work on the next ones:

Strip 01
Strip 02
Strip 03

lol those where enjoyable

yesterdayshero wrote:I love these!! MOAR NAO!

Strip 03: Bonus

yesterdayshero wrote:gonna follow you on dA....*evil laugh*

Oh boy...

yesterdayshero wrote:Anyway for the crit, I'd say your hands are a little too big, and the face look slightly werid sometimes but besides that its awesome, the expressions are tight.

redprincess wrote:lol those where enjoyable

Thanks, guys. I'll keep those in mind while working on the next one.

yesterdayshero wrote:loloolololololololoolololololololololololollololololololololololollolollool

You mean "Trololoolololololololoolololololololololololollololololololololololollolollool"?

LOL that girl is awesome, so are they just for strips or are they part of something bigger?

They're just for strips as of now. Those two have bigger roles from a different story I have, but I'll work on that later.

I like it. Kinda want to see the bottom shadow on the nose of that silver haired girl, if I was being nitpicky.