I think I'm trying to kill myself...
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- yesterdayshero
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Sorry, I started playing pokemon again... - -'
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A double page layout, I'm thinking I went too much with the tones. It's suppose to be a train accident due to massive land slide off a cliff.
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redprincess wrote:A double page layout, I'm thinking I went too much with the tones. It's suppose to be a train accident due to massive land slide off a cliff.
I'm inclined to agree that the tones are a bit overdone...
...says the guy who overdoes his own tones.
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I really try my best not to over do it with tones, although when I didn't tone the water, it looks weirdish, and when I didn't tone the ground it looked funny as well. But I do like the tone on top, makes it look eerie. Here is it untoned.
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Thinking it's just the 'over' tones that need to be... ...toned down.
I might need to shoot myself for that.
I could be wrong, of course.
I might need to shoot myself for that.
I could be wrong, of course.
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I tried removing the tone over the dirt. It looks weird without the overtone, but with it, it doesnt look so bad.
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I liked the first one more, and ADR you don't overtone that much, everyone has there overtoning period
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now I'm conflicted. lol
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I think overtoning is having alot of tones panel after panel, its fine if one panel get overtoned if its for mood
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The key to drawing a lot of trees or people packed together is a big blur of greyish with the last row representing shapes of heads/treetopsredprincess wrote: My hand hurts like hell after drawing those trees (took over 2 hours) and the second panel I traced, but I still like how it came out.
Only detail you will have to draw is the front row, those have to actually look like people/trees, and a few lost ones in the crowd so they stick out.
The rest are nothing more then silhouettes.
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I suppose thats one way. I do know that when I look out over the vast number of trees in the area from the hill, I can see the detail about the same. I can understand super close up having more detail. Oh well.
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I can't draw shit myself, but that's what my book on "learning how to draw a comic" says
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