2017-05-23 Momma needs to discipline

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2017-05-23 Momma needs to discipline

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Re: 2017-05-23 Momma needs to discipline

Post by Osaru Sensei » Tue Jun 13, 2017 6:38 am

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Re: 2017-05-23 Momma needs to discipline

Post by Spidrift » Tue Jun 13, 2017 8:57 am

Plus, all this cunning (ahem) is causing Eloise grammatical problems. Jean becomes "my" and "his" in the same sentence. Meanwhile, Nadine's kinkiness gets mildly transgressive. And how far did she have to throw those trousers to make them appear that small?

Anyhow, it looks like the plot twist here might be Eloise finding she has slightly stronger real feelings for Alex than she wants (hence the VR kiss going "naturally"). But there's a lot of ways this could go.
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Re: 2017-05-23 Momma needs to discipline

Post by vampire hunter D » Tue Jun 13, 2017 10:52 am

So, is she trying to seduce him asthe cousin? Or Jean? Because at the moment I think Jean has the better chance
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Re: 2017-05-23 Momma needs to discipline

Post by Spidrift » Tue Jun 13, 2017 12:49 pm

Either would work for her purposes, except of course that "Jean's" cover would be blown in a pants-off situation. So I imagine that "Jean" will aim to keep Alex stringing along in sexual confusion, and then Eloise will, if she thinks it's necessary and/or amusing, go the whole way.

Really, though, the risky question is whether she keeps Nadine around as her mother's voice. It makes the choreography easier, but it also risks Alex blundering into the wrong room at the wrong moment.

And we readers can see another risk; that the confused Alex will discuss his situation with one of his friends - whose brains aren't so hormone-addled, or at least not in the same way.
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Post by brasca » Tue Jun 13, 2017 1:44 pm

When we were first introduced to Nadine I thought she was the simple minded girlfriend of Eloise, but I'm starting to think she's the real brain of this bunch.

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Re: 2017-05-23 Momma needs to discipline

Post by Spidrift » Tue Jun 13, 2017 1:54 pm

I hate talking D&D'ese, but hey, IQ 15, chaotic neutral. She's another lover of anarchy with a gift for getting her beloved into bed. She'd get on great with Sonya, but the world might not survive.
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Re: 2017-05-23 Momma needs to discipline

Post by Vitocap » Tue Jun 13, 2017 2:56 pm

True Avery, come back! The sperm-fest is over!
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Re: 2017-05-23 Momma needs to discipline

Post by Spidrift » Tue Jun 13, 2017 3:31 pm

Until such time as Eloise has to make the not-very-ultimate sacrifice to keep Alex's IQ safely at room temperature.
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Re: 2017-05-23 Momma needs to discipline

Post by edisnooM » Wed Jun 14, 2017 1:08 am

So I'm gathering from the improv line about the VR kiss that part wasn't in the script, although Nadine says it went more naturally than she thought it would so that implies she had prior knowledge of it before hand. I would dearly love to actually see their game plan for all this.

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Re: 2017-05-23 Momma needs to discipline

Post by Don Alexander » Fri Jul 21, 2017 12:10 am

I now wonder how many people were turned on by Nadine's incestual baby-roleplay. :D

(Me actually not, though I thought it to be really amusing and not a turn-off.)
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