Fragile: Chapter 03

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But it's great that they're caught early on.... before let's say a printed version or something :YMDAYDREAM:

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Makes me wonder if she's got a history of doing that. ;)
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SMILE WHEN YOU ORDER THAT STRAWBERRY FRAPPÉ! :-w

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Also, yay for the return of Mamó!!
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I think this order will be on the house. Of course, Mamó just might have a couple of words with Emily about her little tantrum the other night.

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New Fragile!

Man, Mamö don't take no shit from Emibody, huh?? ;))

So, is Em just a germaphobe, or is she on immunosupressants?
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That would be an interesting twist I hadn't considered before - the possibility that Emily's a hypochondriac / germophobe.

However, it doesn't explain her exemption from PE, so it's likely she does have a medical condition, which may indeed be serious, but maybe it isn't as life-threatening as she believes it is. After all, she had a collection of friends at her old home she still chats with over the 'net, and particularly at the beginning she was showing antagonism with having to move.

Meanwhile: if you're going to feign an injury lasting longer than it did, it helps to remember exactly where it was! :)

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I think she may just be trying to be a snot there, but time will tell.


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I think because of her illness, she is just not use to touching people she just met.
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Mmmh, Emily sure love to play victim. Hope she will grow out of it. Nice to see Mamo put her in her place. :D

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First of all, do we know what her illness is?

Secondly- I hate touching people period even if I've met them. I will put change on the shelf near the register before I risk touching the cashier.
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Good save by Mamó...

...but isn't Emily devious?!

The relationship between Marian and Emily is certainly interesting - Marian's trying (too hard) to be friendly with Emily and bring her into her group of friends, while Emily's intent on doing the opposite. Both are largely failing in their respective missions...

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New Fragile!

Emily is starting to piss me off... X(

And, wow, Julian sure has the look for Marian......'s sister.

I think she needs to reconsider the boy from school, unless she wants an ugly sibling fight. :P
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And Steph seems oblivious of course. :))
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I'm getting some highly conflicting opinions from the writing.

Last Chapter set Emily up to be a slightly jaded beyond her age but still somewhat likeable girl once you got past all the issues and complexes that create a mildly dis-likeable surface personality.

This Chapter's pretty much tossing all that in the bin and making her into a petty sociopath.

So...are we supposed to be sympathizing with her or not?

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:)) I know I am in the minority but that was funny. :))
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