by Ravenhull » Wed Dec 07, 2011 5:00 am
Okay, got the Kindle edition of Vol 2. A couple of questions for you, Adam (and Ian too). (Warning, here be spoilers)
PMS: Is the 'Jane Doe' that Lita possesses effectively a spoiler for VC when it hits the webpage? Though her hair seems different. Also, is it just me, or was I right in thinking her initial appearance was a homage to an old Ranma story? I take it that Charlotte's 'brainwashed' outfit is a Zatana shout out, or am I wrong? And Who were Steph and Katie homaging there? Speaking of Char, I rather enjoyed that nice little bit of fanservice surrounding my favorite PMS'r, in both of her outfits there.
As for VC, well I don't think anybody's opinion will shift much in either direction by the time Vol 2 is done. On the other hand, this was all written out and ready before page 1 hit the web, and Adam might be looking at fan reaction for Vol 3. Was the reference to the schools of EC/MC having teams there planned ahead of time, or something thrown in after the story was mostly done? I wish we could at least seen them in the background, though I am certain none of the main EC/MC characters would be on the teams. I really would have loved a brief encounter between the VC girls and one or more of the girls from either of those schools. Something along the lines of 'okay, they make me very uneasy'.
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