Jojo's art constructive criticism is welcome
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Jojoluvs
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Jojo's art constructive criticism is welcome
I'm very sorry about the quality, my scanner is not working and I had to take these pictures from my phone. Most of these photos are brief scketches, therefore the hair sucks :/ . I hope all of you enjoy these; constructive criticism is welcome. I will post my inked and colored art after I buy a new scanner.
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Lord Styphon
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Re: Jojo's art constructive criticism is welcome
Creepy.Jojoluvs wrote:
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Jojoluvs
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Re: Jojo's art constructive criticism is welcome
Haha! I can see what you mean. 
Are the others okay?
Are the others okay?-
Dai
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Re: Jojo's art constructive criticism is welcome
I would say that you're already good with close ups and waist up shots. You should be trying out natural and dynamic full body shots by now. And also, that hand you drew could use some adjustments.
Is she supposed to be creepy?Jojoluvs wrote:Haha! I can see what you mean.
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Jojoluvs
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Re: Jojo's art constructive criticism is welcome
Thanks! 
I'm currently working on a full body shot right now and I recently bought a hand model to help with the hands. It might take awhile to post the pic since I'm also working on different facial expressions. I will also post those pics as well.
I'm currently working on a full body shot right now and I recently bought a hand model to help with the hands. It might take awhile to post the pic since I'm also working on different facial expressions. I will also post those pics as well.No, I wanted her to be staring into space. When I finished drawing the eyes, I realized I should've drawn her looking straight at the viewer or closed her eyes slightly. At that point the lead was too dark so I could'nt erase it. :/Dai wrote:Is she supposed to be creepy?