[Critique Corner] Everyone welcome

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Re: [Critique Corner] Everyone welcome

Post by yesterdayshero » Sat Jul 02, 2011 1:58 pm

loloolololololololoolololololololololololollololololololololololollolollool I love these!! MOAR NAO!

Anyway for the crit, I'd say your hands are a little too big, and the face look slightly werid sometimes but besides that its awesome, the expressions are tight. gonna follow you on dA....*evil laugh*
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Re: [Critique Corner] Everyone welcome

Post by redprincess » Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:01 pm

Dai wrote:I figured that I should probably share what I've been working on lately. I've been drawing webcomics during the past month, I'd like to know if there's anything you guys think I should change or improve on before I work on the next ones:

Strip 01
Strip 02
Strip 03


lol those where enjoyable

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Re: [Critique Corner] Everyone welcome

Post by Dai » Sun Jul 03, 2011 1:46 am

yesterdayshero wrote:I love these!! MOAR NAO!
Strip 03: Bonus
yesterdayshero wrote:gonna follow you on dA....*evil laugh*
Oh boy...
yesterdayshero wrote:Anyway for the crit, I'd say your hands are a little too big, and the face look slightly werid sometimes but besides that its awesome, the expressions are tight.
redprincess wrote:lol those where enjoyable
Thanks, guys. I'll keep those in mind while working on the next one.
yesterdayshero wrote:loloolololololololoolololololololololololollololololololololololollolollool
You mean "Trololoolololololololoolololololololololololollololololololololololollolollool"?

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Re: [Critique Corner] Everyone welcome

Post by yesterdayshero » Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:25 pm

LOL that girl is awesome, so are they just for strips or are they part of something bigger?
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Re: [Critique Corner] Everyone welcome

Post by Dai » Sun Jul 03, 2011 11:47 pm

They're just for strips as of now. Those two have bigger roles from a different story I have, but I'll work on that later.

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Re: [Critique Corner] Everyone welcome

Post by shutupadrian » Tue Jul 05, 2011 3:46 am

I like it. Kinda want to see the bottom shadow on the nose of that silver haired girl, if I was being nitpicky.

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