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aw yeah-by the way making stories is pretty hard. i have some trouble with it too
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Martyr wrote:It reminds me of something..full metalpanic,elfen lied..ahh i no it reminds me of somethin(aw yeah,ever watched elfen lied?that anime is gorey as hell )But yeah i wish i had a deviantart account i got stuff i want to show, i'm kinda paranoid though-u got one?

aw yeah-by the way making stories is pretty hard. i have some trouble with it too
yeah its hard very hard

no i aint watched it i read the first chapter of the manga but it turned me off

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woo! yeah-i'll check it out
i don't like elfen lied that much either
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something i drew for a contest lol
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Niiiicce coloring. but-u think they look a bit stiff?and the wrinkles look like they are used in odd places. maybe u can make it more flexible.but on the other hand u are one creative guy
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Martyr wrote:Niiiicce coloring. but-u think they look a bit stiff?and the wrinkles look like they are used in odd places. maybe u can make it more flexible.but on the other hand u are one creative guy
I agree, the wrinkles look a little too funny and the black-winged person's arm looks stiff. I think you have a lot of potential and are pretty good, but you need to practice movement and anatomy.

Don't get me wrong, you're great, at least you're brave enough to put your art up here, I'm not :sweat:
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StrateryB wrote:
Martyr wrote:Niiiicce coloring. but-u think they look a bit stiff?and the wrinkles look like they are used in odd places. maybe u can make it more flexible.but on the other hand u are one creative guy
I agree, the wrinkles look a little too funny and the black-winged person's arm looks stiff. I think you have a lot of potential and are pretty good, but you need to practice movement and anatomy.

Don't get me wrong, you're great, at least you're brave enough to put your art up here, I'm not :sweat:
:saaad: stiff? yeah i messed up that arm and the other guys arm too ><lol>0<

need alot of work still.....=/

thanks i love you both!!! XOXOXOXOXO
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latest page of my manga enjoy....pg37-38 reads from R to L
whats happening here is that she against her will she imagines herself killing a person she meets(or sees) for the first time ya know? =D

visit my DA page!!!!http://el-abuso-capital.deviantart.com
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wow, thats nice. u did a good job making it look alittle scary too. hey-do u have to pay for deviant art?
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Martyr wrote:wow, thats nice. u did a good job making it look alittle scary too. hey-do u have to pay for deviant art?
o.O pay fo DA??? watcha takin about willis???

its FREE but if you wanna to browse without ads you pay a small fee...

join DA!!! its fun!!! ^^

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yesterdayshero wrote:
Martyr wrote:wow, thats nice. u did a good job making it look alittle scary too. hey-do u have to pay for deviant art?
o.O pay fo DA??? watcha takin about willis???

its FREE but if you wanna to browse without ads you pay a small fee...

join DA!!! its fun!!! ^^

thanks for your comment!!!
thank u thank u thank u thank u!u rock man! people.were.telling me u gotta pay for it. yeah i checked it out but then i got confused by all these confusing words and started to believe maybe u do gotta pay. anyways keep trying on your art cuz to my opinion u have alot of potential. do u have manga studio or photoshop? i was wonderin about that for a while-but then i forgot,so,u know...
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Martyr wrote:
yesterdayshero wrote:
Martyr wrote:wow, thats nice. u did a good job making it look alittle scary too. hey-do u have to pay for deviant art?
o.O pay fo DA??? watcha takin about willis???

its FREE but if you wanna to browse without ads you pay a small fee...

join DA!!! its fun!!! ^^

thanks for your comment!!!
thank u thank u thank u thank u!u rock man! people.were.telling me u gotta pay for it. yeah i checked it out but then i got confused by all these confusing words and started to believe maybe u do gotta pay. anyways keep trying on your art cuz to my opinion u have alot of potential. do u have manga studio or photoshop? i was wonderin about that for a while-but then i forgot,so,u know...
^^

i do everything by hand [drawing inking] and then i scan it in and use deleter comicworks kinda like magna studio but the screentones are higher quality in opinion its a japanese program translated into english and its cheaper than manga studio on down part is that it only works with B&W no color and it doesnt get any updates... :R

i have photoshop Cs3 too but i hardly use it...=/ and i do have mangastudio too but i thought it sucked....

i wanna see some of your work come on get a DA page...
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yesterdayshero wrote:
Martyr wrote:
yesterdayshero wrote: o.O pay fo DA??? watcha takin about willis???

its FREE but if you wanna to browse without ads you pay a small fee...

join DA!!! its fun!!! ^^

thanks for your comment!!!
thank u thank u thank u thank u!u rock man! people.were.telling me u gotta pay for it. yeah i checked it out but then i got confused by all these confusing words and started to believe maybe u do gotta pay. anyways keep trying on your art cuz to my opinion u have alot of potential. do u have manga studio or photoshop? i was wonderin about that for a while-but then i forgot,so,u know...
^^

i do everything by hand [drawing inking] and then i scan it in and use deleter comicworks kinda like magna studio but the screentones are higher quality in opinion its a japanese program translated into english and its cheaper than manga studio on down part is that it only works with B&W no color and it doesnt get any updates... :R

i have photoshop Cs3 too but i hardly use it...=/ and i do have mangastudio too but i thought it sucked....

i wanna see some of your work come on get a DA page...
I don't really like photoshop but that's just me, and I do kinda agree, mangastudio isn't very good but it's not bad, it's just confusing :dizzzy2:
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StrateryB wrote:
yesterdayshero wrote:
Martyr wrote: thank u thank u thank u thank u!u rock man! people.were.telling me u gotta pay for it. yeah i checked it out but then i got confused by all these confusing words and started to believe maybe u do gotta pay. anyways keep trying on your art cuz to my opinion u have alot of potential. do u have manga studio or photoshop? i was wonderin about that for a while-but then i forgot,so,u know...
^^

i do everything by hand [drawing inking] and then i scan it in and use deleter comicworks kinda like magna studio but the screentones are higher quality in opinion its a japanese program translated into english and its cheaper than manga studio on down part is that it only works with B&W no color and it doesnt get any updates... :R

i have photoshop Cs3 too but i hardly use it...=/ and i do have mangastudio too but i thought it sucked....

i wanna see some of your work come on get a DA page...
I don't really like photoshop but that's just me, and I do kinda agree, mangastudio isn't very good but it's not bad, it's just confusing :dizzzy2:
photoshop useful when you do drawing bigger than your scanner and for other stuff

but my true love is Deleter Comicworks its so easy to use :luv:

manga studio tones looks funny and werid but deleter a real screentone company and the software has all of there screentones...^.~

i wanna see some of you art come on! ^^
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someday...someday i'll have my own deviant art page
anyways-if i ever do get one i promise i'll show it to u :happy:
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