13-06-07 [AAJ] Aftermath 3

Luna may be the perfect secret agent, but can she survive her toughest challenge yet--fitting in at high school?

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13-06-07 [AAJ] Aftermath 3

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http://www.amazingagentjennifer.com/str ... ftermath_3

In some ways, I think her last statement was true in some ways...
"Don't call me a dirty old man.... Cuz I'm not old... I'm of a fine vintage..."
"Get your mind out the gutter... you're crowding me."

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Re: 13-06-07 [AAJ] Aftermath 3

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Yep, He loved her, but he really didn't know her.

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Yep. When we wrote it, it wasn't a mad, anti-Dan thing, but a sad, anti-Jennifer thing she was saying.

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o_o She's still an idiot.

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Actually, considering Jonah knows Luna is a secret agent, I'd say the cover is pretty much pointless to maintain at this point. Not to mention, Jennifer, how odd of you, only interested in your (okay, pretend) husband when he's given up on you and started to pay attention to another woman. Besides, even before that you certainly weren't doing your bit to maintain the cover.

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