12-12-21 [AAJ] Snickerdoodle Cookie

Luna may be the perfect secret agent, but can she survive her toughest challenge yet--fitting in at high school?

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12-12-21 [AAJ] Snickerdoodle Cookie

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http://www.amazingagentjennifer.com/str ... dle_cookie

Whenever I read this page, I keep hearing Robin Williams talking about dealing with this pregnant wife, "And the only thing that will save your is Hagen Das!" ;)

And a cute little bit of fanservice there with Kimmie there. ;)
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Re: 12-12-21 [AAJ] Snickerdoodle Cookie

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How is it possible she doesn't weigh over 300 pounds with all that ice cream? :))

Also, fanservice is cute, but I'm usually more interested in the story. That's what can make or break a strip.

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Re: 12-12-21 [AAJ] Snickerdoodle Cookie

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Actually one of the things I've enjoyed about the Amazing Agent titles is that fanservice, while present from time to time, is not the default. It's all fine and good in titles like VC, but here its just a nice bonus.
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the story is going on with subtle and pleasing fanservice, i see no issues.

I simply love her smile in the 2nd panel. No one is a font of positive energy like she is.

except maybe the count.
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Re: 12-12-21 [AAJ] Snickerdoodle Cookie

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I'm still not sure this'll work on Jennifer, but it's heartwarming to see Kim try. ^^

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