Dangerously Chloe 10-09-18 The World Feels Hollow

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Re: Dangerously Chloe 10-09-18 The World Feels Hollow

Post by FuzzyFace » Thu Sep 13, 2018 1:34 am

Lerianis wrote:
Wed Sep 12, 2018 1:18 pm
Well remember: The angel girl was trying to save Teddy and Teddi's lives. Splitting her into two with the reapers scythe was probably an unforeseen consequence of doing something that had never been done before!
It's not a question of whether you can rationalize the result - it's that they used pretty much this exact same plot point in MC - main character splitting into two people. It largely destroyed major tensions and character development there, and is likely to do so here as well.

But let's be fair. Maybe those of us in here, with our concern for an interesting story, are the exception. Maybe the average reader just wants to treat these comics as soft porn, and sees plot as getting in the way?

Seriously, I once invited people from what seemed an appropriate forum to read my web novel. Thousands took me up on it... and then stopped reading when they saw that it wasn't porn.

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Re: Dangerously Chloe 10-09-18 The World Feels Hollow

Post by Error of Logic » Thu Sep 13, 2018 6:37 am

That was unkind of them. And it says more about their character than the quality of your novel.

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