Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
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- Storm-forge mystique
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
So despite being turned into a girl, you're determined to be the ultimate man? Maybe you should look for someone who looks like they might fit that description... hint, hint...
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
I don't think Teddy knows any of them.Passing Through wrote: ↑Mon Nov 20, 2017 5:55 amCould they not just pop round to Charybdis and ask a favour from Dio, the kitty cad or the puppy? Layla might be a bit miffed about it, but that always seems to end in nookie for them, so...
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
I get the complaints, but Teddi's titties are so scrumptious I don't want them to go away ever.
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
Really?
Maybe if they had a little bit of weight to them (i.e. - affected by gravity) I could see where the appeal was; but they look like overly inflated beach balls glued to his chest.
Artistically/aesthetically speaking - they look ridiculous; much like cheap implants.
Maybe if they had a little bit of weight to them (i.e. - affected by gravity) I could see where the appeal was; but they look like overly inflated beach balls glued to his chest.
Artistically/aesthetically speaking - they look ridiculous; much like cheap implants.
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
Hehe oh the stuff I've commissioned, I'm perfectly fine with totally fake looking tatas.
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
Okay. Who didn't see this coming? It's all coming to a head. And that head is, Teddy having sex with Chloe. Then making Chloe all better. Then them getting together. The end.
I'm gonna ride this out to the end...but it looks like the end of this comic is coming pretty damn soon.
I'm gonna ride this out to the end...but it looks like the end of this comic is coming pretty damn soon.
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
Still expecting the final punch line to be Chloe saying she already took care of her little problem on her own - making of all this for naught.
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
....She hasn't tried to eat Teddy in her sleep in awhile now that you mention it.
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
O.O Teddy learns to shapeshift and then can be with Al in whatever form he's in!
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
To be fair, Teddy is - supposedly - still spending his nights sleeping at a hotel to avoid Chloe.
However, the thing that stands out for me is that Chloe doesn't seem to have been in the least bit affected by 1) loud sex taking place in the house and 2) Teddy being involved in said sex in the very same house. Chloe should be collapsed in orgasmic bliss - but isn't; she's currently chatting it up with Abby, with no ill affect.
So, either the writer has forgotten that Chloe is directly affected by Teddy's sexy times or this is an example of a sloppily written plot; where all these things are happening at different times through the day.
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
Stories with a significant supernatural element really need to establish some ground rules for the supernatural (even if they’re just “This is bigger and weirder than you can imagine”, as in Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell), and then stick to them. Otherwise, they just seem to be faffing about.
The *C universe has a distinct sense of just faffing about.
The *C universe has a distinct sense of just faffing about.
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
I'll go with this, as the sex may even have been hours ago while Abby was out playing up a tree and Chloe sleeping, and now this post-coital discussion is in fact happening while Abby is pumping Chloe for info over breakfast.
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
Guys, remember that Al doesn't have anything for Chloe to feed on. And I have the feeling that Teddy is, just maybe, going to go incubus which might be the answer.
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Re: Dangerously Chloe 20-11-17 The Ultimate Man
I was thinking it would be solved by someone going full incubus (that chechov's gun still hasn't been fired). But I figured/was hoping it would be Lucretia
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